First Drafts to Final Product

After receiving feedback on our ancillary texts, we made some changes to make our products more successful and professional. This post shows a comparison of the original creation and final production.

Front:

• Change the text font – make them the same to make it look more professional.
• Change the text position – keep the title at the top but reposition the artists name to make itmore interesting.
• Increase the size of Bella to draw the focus on her.

Back:

• Smaller text of the song titles – draw more focus to the protagonist’s face.
• Bigger image of Bella – make it the focal point of the back panel.
• Smaller barcode
• Copyright information should be added.
• Remove the paint splatter line - Increase the quality of the panel
• Change the font – add continuity between panels and magazine advert.

Side:

• Text positioning – Centre the text.
• Add production logo – Increased the professionality of album.
• Add shadowing to title to make it stand out – Catches the attention when on the shelf.

Disk:

• Change text position -  make it more unique and interesting
• Show design through the disk centre – Show the image is reflected behind the disk

Inside:

• Increase the size of paint explosion.

As we were unsure about this change, we decided to ask our focus group what they thought. 

Lexie: "Change to larger as it creates more of an impact on the audience."

Samuel: "Change it because it make the panel brighter and more colourful."

Jessica: "Keep the same as I like its a feature rather than the background."

Freddie: "I think change it because it makes it more eye catching and unique.

Magazine:

• Increase size of Bella – centre of magazine advert to capture attention
• Positioning of record label
• Change size of text – Show importance through size