Initial feedback:
- Some shots are shaky - consider using a tool or refilming using a tripod and dolly.
- Enhance the colours and white background on the lip-syncing shots to add definition.
- Re-film stage shots to focus on her and her improvements. Use close ups of Bella.
- Ending is too predictable.
- Use a zoom in close up of Bella in one location and zoom out in another for a more creative transition.
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